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I tried to redesign a poster that was more suitable in design terms. The one they created isn't bad, but in terms of readability, cohesiveness, and composition it is lacking. The body text, header, and footer are all to close to the edge of the canvas, so it's creating tension which isn't appealing to the eye. The line height in the text is very close together and it is center aligned which is making it hard to read and it's not natural for your eyes to jump like that when you are read large body text. The last thing is that the fonts don't go together to well and it could match better. While creating the redesign I kept these things in mind and I gave space around the canvas, centered everything, the fonts match well, and the text is spaced out in a way that is much more readable, but it still keeps the height of the text in according to their importance.